To me,

Posted on by Arrows & Metaphors

the world spins 

ready to loose, and peel

comparable to a star

proudly moving through water

there is no equal,  more beautiful 

than her roseness at my feet

i admit here, i seek shelter 

a shelter of brightness 

when most of my most, is dark

cross high and unstrange 

 

15 comments

  1. Steve Manolis · September 3, 2015

    Beautiful poem

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  2. kvennarad · September 3, 2015

    You sing.

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  3. labyrinthpoet · September 4, 2015

    Captivating poem

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  4. Iris@poetsmith · September 4, 2015

    Beautiful, moving words. Take care. Regards, Iris

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  5. TheDidge · September 4, 2015

    Beautiful

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  6. braon · September 11, 2015

    like your poems

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  7. gigoid · September 11, 2015

    🙂 Light after/amidst the dark is peace; lovely feeling…

    Amazing, as always, hermanita. Thanks.

    gigoid

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  8. AnElephantCant · September 19, 2015

    Cool poem.
    Great photograph, too.

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  9. N Filbert · September 20, 2015

    love what i see of that tattoo!

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  10. Tanveer Rauf · September 20, 2015

    beautiful poetry

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  11. Carisa Adrienne · September 21, 2015

    ((((Hugs))))) ❤️

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    • Mari · September 21, 2015

      Thank you love, truly ..

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      • Carisa Adrienne · September 21, 2015

        Mari, thank you sharing your beautiful writings with all… But most of all thank you for sharing your most precious gifts you’ve ever held. I now hold them too❤️

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        • Mari · September 21, 2015

          Thank you Carisa. I try so very hard. I find peace and release.

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